Week 14: Collaborative Skills

Today, I would like to focus on what I have been doing as a bird in a cage during this “long” outbreak, apart from being at home on my phone, watching the news about the pandemic, watching movies and TV shows, and so on. I was able to have good conversations with my parents during the quarantine and cooked some good food for them, which led to me learning a lot of dishes and desserts, and bread, giving me an additional life skill during this time.

Below are some things I have done during the quarantine that makes me feel I am very talented in the dessert category; I should be able to be a good dessert maker.

Macaroons

The first dessert I try to make is Macaroon which I love to eat and buy whenever I see it in any dessert store but it’s a little bit expensive.

I had a lot of challenges at the beginning, the macarons didn’t look good (day 1 and 2) and tasted a little strange; I thought about giving up but I gave myself one last chance and by the third time I felt the taste improved and the appearance was similar to the ones sold outside (day 3).

By making macarons I feel like I’ve become more patient. I would relax for a while when I was focusing on making desserts and not thinking about how scary the virus was outside. I am a person who is prone to anxiety, and I was very anxious in quarantine while worrying about not being able to finish my studies. It is my first year in college after all, and a lot of it is new and unfamiliar, and doing dessert is what I found to ease my mood. 

Birthday Cakes

After macarons, the second dessert I wanted to make was a cake, which means not a cupcake, but like a birthday cake, because my brother and mother, and even myself, spent our birthdays in quarantine during the pandemic and since that time we don’t dare to eat the cakes that are from outside.

The first birthday cake I made was for my brother’s birthday. It was an Earl Grey bubble melt cake with cream and bubble on top, and when we cut it apart, the cream and bubbles would flow down like a waterfall. It was healing to see the cream slowly flowing down. This was the first cake that I made, and I felt that I finished it pretty well, and I became more and more confident to do all the things that followed and to be comfortable with it. 

The second cake was for my birthday, it was a normal strawberry and cherry cream cake, and I loved it, it tasted amazing. I believe this will be one of my most memorable birthdays because I celebrated it by making my cake, which was a new experience for me, it was amazing and interesting. Although I couldn’t spend my birthday with many friends, and also although it was my 18th birthday, I didn’t feel disappointed or unhappy, I still had a meaningful and satisfying day.

The last one was strawberry yogurt with waffle cake, which took more time than the first two cakes, it was a lot of work and tedious. While it took a lot of time, I still felt a sense of accomplishment when it was finished. Making cake has developed my patience and concentration. It is meaningful and loving to make a homemade cake for your family or beloved ones on their birthday.

 

Week 6

I chose the Science News article  “How Coronavirus Stress May Scramble Our Brains”. I chose this article over the others because I felt that I could relate to this article much more. Before the pandemic I already had to deal with a lot of stress. I take care of all my siblings while my parents can’t. I relied on working a lot. Once I lost my job in the beginning of the pandemic, the stress piled on. The stress of not working, the stress of figuring out what to do with my siblings, the stress of what happens if I get the virus. I genuinely feel like having so much stress hit me like that at one time has turned my brain into permanent mush. I really do feel like the stress of everything that happened during this pandemic caused many people’s brains to be a different way. The author used im guessing interviews with psychologists, brain experts etc to show how the stress from the pandemic affected our brains. In the article, there was an image showing how the brain functions when people are stressed and when they aren’t. When we’re stressed, we have a weaker control of our thoughts, emotions and how we act. I would say this article is an informative text and I definitely gravitate towards that because it’s much simpler for me to understand and break down. It’s very difficult for me to write and analyze writings that kind of speak from someone’s experiences because it’s usually easier when you can understand where they’re coming from and a lot of times I can’t pick up on it.

Week 5

Reflective writing is when someone basically thinks before they write. Whatever the person wrote was well thought out, they put a lot of time into their writing. I do reflective writing a lot but never realized it until this course. I overanalyze and take time about what topic would fit in one place, how long it should be, should it be a leading point or an ending point, everything. In a way, reflective writing pushes you to really write your best work. It helps organize your thoughts and organize it a certain way. When writing, I always start off with an outline of some kind so that I can organize and see all my thoughts in one place. I then organize it by importance. For example, with the Discourse Communities assignment I wrote about my community Brooklyn. In my head I already knew I would have to present the problem and then suggest a solution. Once I identified the problem, I formed my solution. However, in order for someone to really feel the severity of an issue to even want to help with a solution, some personal flair needs to be added. I left the ending paragraphs to talk about personal experiences and tie it into why not having the solution at that time was a negative thing. After that, I added a few words anyone can relate to. Not just people in my city, not just minorities but anyone who needed something done and couldn’t have it done. This was probably one of my favorite pieces that I wrote because it hit so close to home and I was finally able to use things I go through to maybe make someone not feel so alone or finally feel like their community isn’t the only one going through it.

Week 14: Collaborative Skills (Yailene Rodriguez)

“Besides feeling like I haven’t had an actual routine since March 2020, there have been some positive outcomes since this pandemic quarantine started. I believe the months of being indoors has allowed me to bring out my creative side. Prior to the outbreak, I really felt like I had no creativity. I felt this especially when it was time to write college essays. College essays usually ask you to talk about great achievements and things you have done that are out of the ordinary. I did no extracurricular activities long enough to be able to mention them in my essays. Most kids were able to talk about the sports they were in, the songs they made, and what dance they performed in. Although my school was a performing arts school, I was not as creative as one should be in an art school. My school did make freshmen try out all the majors before they made a decision. I chose art out of music, dance, and drama because art was the only major that did not need to perform. It wasn’t that I wasn’t interested in the other majors, it was the fear of not bringing the same creativity to the table, as the other kids did. I always limited myself to what I could explore and that is the reason I didn’t join the softball team like I wanted to, or join the school play, or I could have picked to be a music major, which is what I actually wanted. I also had no clue of what I wanted to do in myself and had no hobbies. Looking back and knowing that my high school experience was cut short, I wished I realized how much creativity I actually had. A year later and I now know I have found out a lot about myself that I might have not found if I wasn’t trapped in my room for months.
One way my creativity branched out is throughout high school as an art major we would have to submit a weekly sketchbook of three random objects we picked at the beginning of the year. I hated this assignment because for all three years I was never able to draw realistic still-life drawings which was the assignment. Also with the amount of school work I had, I usually rushed the drawings. Having this extra time and wanting to step out of the three objects sketch, I decided to paint something that I wanted instead of following what the assignment was. I already had a great connection with the teacher. I believed that she would rather enjoy seeing me finally showing my artistic creativity than the same boring drawings I would give her for years. Knowing this I had little fear that my teacher would be upset that I didn’t continue following the assignment. So I submitted it to my teacher and she actually enjoyed that I stepped out of what she asked because she was able to see the effort and creativity that I put in rather than how I used to submit work. After getting that encouragement from my teacher I started looking forward to the weekly assignment and tried out different techniques. I tried pixel art, following a Tik Tok video on a moonlit ocean, making a realistic-looking bubble, recycled art, and drawing on an iPad. I enjoyed it so much that I ended up buying art supplies, something I didn’t do the whole time I was an art major. This was a great way I spent my time to take my mind off the fear I had about hearing all the people who had passed for COVID.”
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Collaborative Skills (Deisi Naula)

Collaborative Skills (Deisi Naula)

                  2020 has been the most unpredictable year of my generation. It started off with the World Health Administration declaring that we’re in a pandemic to the whole world shutting down. As the number of people being affected by the Coronavirus kept increasing, we were all concerned not only for ourselves but for our entire family and friends. Many people lost their jobs, students switched to online school, millions have died, essential workers risked their lives,  and worked from home. Families ran out of essential things such as toilet paper and food. The hardships of the past year have shaped us into who we are today. If we hadn’t taken the time for ourselves to experience all the memories that we made in 2020, things would be completely different. In my opinion, the past year happened for a reason, and for many, it has been a difficult challenge to overcome. All the negatives that came from the beginning of being isolated have helped us discover ourselves and learn new things. I’ve grown from that year whether it be dealing with grief, learning new recipes, and getting my mental health into a better state. It was getting worse before it got better, and we just had to trust the process. The news kept feeding us with the number of people that kept dying every day all over the world. Hearing these numbers increase every day made us think about death. Many of us don’t overthink that topic because we’re either afraid of it or just don’t like the idea of it. Nobody really tells us how to deal with grief, we kind of just figure it out when it happens.

                 This was my dog, who I named after my favorite WWE wrestler. At the onset of the pandemic started I had to experience the death of my dog. His name was Randy and he died on March 25th, 2020. Randy stayed with my older brother who lived one block away from me. I got a call at 7 a.m. in the morning from my sister-in-law crying. The only thing she said was “Deisi I think it’s time, Randy is dying.” Hearing those words I immediately got up and rushed to her house with my younger brother. He was laying in his bed unable to move with his eyes red. Once I touched him he started to wag his tail trying to get up to greet me and a few seconds later he had a heart attack. My emotions were all over the place and I just felt tears coming down my eyes. I went back home and stared at the wall then fell asleep. A week went by and my behavior changed completely. I became reckless and ignorant. I took a second to sit down and analyze how I was feeling. I understood that I’m in a phase of grief which is denial. I haven’t fully processed that I lost not only a pet but a best friend who was very important to me. It took me a while to realize that I’m not the only one experiencing this during the pandemic because many people were dying and losing family members. Not only that but everyone who owned a pet would understand the feeling. 

 

Week 13: Wikipedia Controversy

In my early years, my teachers told me that Wikipedia shouldn’t be used because anyone can edit the information on the website. After reading “Wikipedia is good for you” by James P. Purdy I realized he was incorrect about Wikipedia. In the essay, it states “Usually teachers do not like two primary aspects of Wikipedia. The first is its open participation: anyone, regardless of background, qualifications, or expertise, can write Wikipedia articles. As a result, articles can display incorrect information. There are many examples of such incorrect information on Wikipedia. Perhaps the most infamous involves the Wikipedia article on John Seigenthaler (former journalist, political advisor, and father of the reporter of the same name on NBC news). Brian Chase changed the article to indicate that Seigenthaler played a role in the assassination of President John F. Kennedy and his brother Robert. This untrue contribution lasted for 132 days (Page, “Wikipedia Biography”).” Wikipedia can help you find many sources of information but people avoid based on the fact of its credibility. As a student, most of my college courses require me to write a research paper. The process of writing a research paper is difficult because you need credible sources but using unreliable sources like Wikipedia your paper would get a failing grade.

Wikipedia as a tool can reinforce approaches to research-based writing. in the text, it states “Wikipedia, that is, can help to illustrate (1) recursive revision based on idea development, (2) textual production based on participation in a conversation rather than isolated thinking, and (3) research based on production rather than only critique (Purdy). The process of successfully contributing to a Wikipedia article, in other words, parallels the process of successfully creating a piece of research-based writing.” The processes are similar and could be used as practice for research-based writing. It can also be used as a reference for sources. After reading the essay, I would consider it a community platform because multiple people are editing articles. Until now I wasn’t aware of the fact multiple people were having a conversation over the article edit, and when I did it came as a shock to me.

 

 

Week 13: Wikipedia Controversy (shafi khan)

In my formative years in school, I was instructed against using Wikipedia in any type of research-based writing because the website was considered a poor source given that it was open to editing and its information kept on changing. Moreover, I was reliably informed that Wikipedia contained opinions rather than facts. Therefore, the information in Wikipedia was either right or wrong since it is mostly individuals’ opinion open for editing and amendment. Based on the information, I did not consider Wikipedia as a credible source to be used or referred to in research-based writing.However, after reading Purdy, I have changed my understanding and opinion regarding the use of Wikipedia as a source or reference in research-based writing. I have realized that Wikipedia is a good source of information like any other reliable source and it only depends on how one uses it. In any case, Wikipedia is more aligned with the format used in research-based writing compared to other sources of information. Therefore, it is not right to say that Wikipedia cannot be used or should never be used as a source in research-based writing as we were informed in early schooling because some of the practices involved in successfully writing a Wikipedia article, including revising, sharing, reviewing, and conversing are also employed in writing research-based texts for college classes.

 

Purdy has explained various ways through which Wikipedia can be a useful tool to me as a student and scholar. First, Wikipedia can be used as a gateway to other texts for my research because its verifiability policy demands that materials posted to articles must be verifiable. Moreover, the website offers the names and direct links to other sources. In essence, such leads will be important to me when I have decided on a topic and I am searching for other sources to develop and support my thinking. In addition, I can use Wikipedia as a student and a scholar to crowdsource ideas. I could read Wikipedia articles related to my topic prior to writing, for instance, a research paper to acquire multiple perspectives or approaches that I might use to write the paper. Hence, Wikipedia articles offer multiple lenses which I can adopt to frame an argument.

 

After reading about how Wikipedia works, I will not consider it a community platform but a professional platform. Contrary to what is known or believed by many individuals that anybody can post or edit articles on Wikipedia whenever they wish, one has to conduct thorough research and have verifiable sources of information properly cited and referenced before writing or editing a Wikipedia article. The fact changes the idea that Wikipedia is a community platform because not all people in the community are capable of conducting thorough research and support their findings with evidence and opinions from other works as required by Wikipedia. I was not aware of the conversation taking place over every article edit. I simply thought that one only needed to open an article and add or remove some words without necessarily proving and supporting their arguments.

Community Platform`

Growing up in a technological society where technology is the way of life and how we utilize it for resources, research purposes and the level of accuracy can be a bit confusing with so much information provided when surfing then internet.  I must admit,  that at time I find myself looking up information and clicking on the links in Wiki for guidance. As a kid I use to hear people joke during an argument about information and sarcastically they would say, “let me guess, your source is from wiki.” Meaning that Wikipedia was not always accurate. As a student, my teachers constantly reminded me not to use  Wikipedia because it was not a good resource and that some information was not accurate.  As explained in the article, “My premise for the first is that you are going to use Wikipedia as a source for writing assignments regardless of cautions against it, so it is more helpful to address ways to use it effectively than to ignore it (and ignoring it precludes some potentially beneficial uses of Wikipedia anyway).”  The rules are if you are going to use it regardless to the teachers advise, one should use it to our advantage. The article also explains that, Wipipedia is a good source and way of good writing practices.  As explained in the article  “Thus, this chapter proceeds with the assumption that it Wikipedia Is Good for You!? 207 is useful to consider Wikipedia as both a product (i.e., a source) and a representation of process (i.e., a guide to practices). It is good for you but one must proceed with caution.

As writers and researchers I understand the concerns that Wiki is not always a good source because it has changeability, and as stated in the article that we must be cautious when using wiki as a source. As a result, articles can display incorrect information. The explanation as to why teachers do not like Wikipedia is because the articles shared do not remain the same, anyone can  can write information on wiki without any educational background, therefore they believe that the information is not accurate. Another underlying issue  is that the articles are constantly changing and teachers feel that is not accurate.

Purdy explains the different ways that Wikipedia can be used as a tool to writing a research paper is by reading the information provided which can guide you into writing a good research project, one can make a change to the wiki article which can be beneficial to writing your research topic. It can also be a good tool to help us revise our work. Is WIKIPEDIA a good site I agree with the following quote, “I actually do think Wikipedia is an amazing thing. It is the first place I go when I’m looking for knowledge. Or when I want to create some.” —Stephen Colbert. This knowledge that he talks about is based on people constantly changing what is wrong about the information being shared.  It is a good source and after this article I will continue to use it as a way to guide me when writing my research topic.

 

 

Week 13: Wikipedia Controversy

I can’t answer the question of how has changed after reading the article “Wikipedia Is Good for You!? By  James P. Purdy because, when I was in high school, a long time ago, I didn’t hear or I did not even know the existence of Wikipedia. I grew up in the country in El Salvador, there was a lack of access to technology. We used huge and old computers once a week with the internet was really limit. Therefore,  I have nothing to compare with it. 

According to Purdy’s article, Wikipedia is a good source that can be used as an aid to explore and find more further information or articles connected to the topic you can access too when you are reaching for. However, he also alerts us that citing Wikipedia is not a good idea. “Wikipedia article are unreliable; the article you cited today may not exist in that form tomorrow” because this information is constantly abducted and when someone cited, then when you go and check again it may be different or can be wrong. That can lead us to trouble because we do not want incurred or false information in our papers. However Wikipedia can be used as a source of ideas, “You might read Wikipedia articles to help you generate search terms to sued to for finding sources in your school library’s catalog or online databases.” so is practically like a bridge that helps you to connect with other important information that can be beneficial for our paper. 

Before reading Pursy’s article I did not know that much about Wikipedia. I meant I have used Wikipedia before but I never used it as a primordial source especially to cite. Yet, most of the time when you search for something in Google Wikipedia is one of the first that pops up. Yes, I will consider this a community platform because is like a collaboration group working together building information, and interacting as well. Until now, after reading the article is that I did not have the knowledge that there is a conversation taking place over every article edit.