Valeria Cortez- Week 6

The article I chose is “The year we gave up our privacy,” by Sara Morrison. Just by reading the title I knew I wanted to read this article, because I knew I would relate to most of what the author wrote about, I assumed it would be about the pandemic and how all of us ended up exposing ourselves by providing a huge amount of personal information to different types of apps and providers. After reading the article I could agree and relate to most of what she wrote, we all saw ourselves with no choice other than to start using technology for numerous things we didn’t before this Global Pandemic, in order to stay connected and have access to things from the outside world. Even for the most simple things such as buying groceries. Just as Morrison said, “People shifted their entire lives online.” Everything was done from home and I think that people even started overusing online services, online shopping, food delivery, groceries delivery and the use of social media. But what we didn’t realize is how much more personal information we started providing and how dangerous that was for us. People gave up so much without even noticing, that’s why scamming, falsification and people trying to take advantage of the social media cases increased, afterall we were all more vulnerable in so many ways.

Since the pandemic started we had to go through so many changes and our privacy is one of the things that has changed the most. I even find it scary sometimes, we as normal human beings don’t know and can’t control where our information goes nor in what hands it could end up and how it could be used. The author talks about her own experience and how she exposed her personal data in many ways. She also mentioned that she started using a tracing system to know more about where her information is going, before reading the article I didn’t even know that those kinds of services existed. As we were going through the pandemic we started giving our credit cards information to sites that we hadn’t even used before, including our phone numbers in communication sites that we hadn’t heard about before, and we did that before even thinking about it twice before, all that because we didn’t have any choice and it was a necessity, specially at the beginning of the pandemic that we were all scared and vulnerable after seeing what was happening  in the world, we just did what we thought we needed to do. 

This issue of us exposing our personal data just recently hit me back in December when I tested positive for COVID. Just minutes after I got my results, I got a call from someone from the department of Health, she asked so much information about me, my family and my job and I just gave it away without thinking. To me it was just shocking how they were keeping track of my family and me by calling us every day to ask more and more information about us. Before going through that I had a similar experience when I travelled during the summer, after arriving to New York I had to fill around 3 forms giving away information that probably wasn’t even necessary even after giving that information they proceeded to call me everyday to ask questions and keep track of me,  they didn’t stop until I completed the mandatory quarantine and tested negative for COVID. After all that now I realize how vulnerable I felt when that was happening, I understand it was part of a protocol but it seemed as they were harassing me, I feel that they did not have to ask so many unnecessary questions, specially when I tested positive, they called more than two times a day making it overwhelming.

Lastly, in “Navigating Genres,” Dirk talks about how the authors chose certain actions to make their work more appealing and understandable. I think that Morrison chose to include her personal experience in order to make her article more relatable to the audience, also I think the title she chose is appealing to the audience and grabs attention, which was what happened to me.

 

Week 6: Genre

In “Navigating Genres”, the author Kerry Dirk wrote about how genre is important  to the relevance of how the text is conveyed to readers. As readers we see genres as boundaries to follow certain texts we want to read. One could be looking into romantic novels or one could be looking into romantic research. These choices the writer makes affect relevance to us readers as Dirk wrote , “… by studying the genres that we find familiar, we can start to see how specific choices that writers make result in specific actions on the part of readers…”. Dirk continues, “it only follows that our own writing must be purposefully written”. Dirk’s statement is true as fellow writers we tend to look at others writers  work style  to inspire our own work’s style and be a purposeful writer. As a writer one must reflect and be self critical of how they portray their work. Sara Morrisson, a reporter from Vox, wrote an article called “The Year We Gave Up On Privacy” . In the article Morrison brought up the issue about privacy and collected data of the masses as we all transition into the quarantine lifestyle of online work, school and socializing. Morrison introduced the issue as an individual who also fell into the masses of giving up privacy and personal data to use the internet especially since covid. People accepted because they needed to do work, school and other social needs. Morrison evaluates how our information is invaded and what it is used for without our discretion as well as show how there is a lack of necessary government regulations on the internet as our information era invades individual information. The way Morrison wrote her article was well portrayed, as she conveyed the issue clearly and unbiased. Then continued to give more information about our private data being given away without realizing how much. Then evaluates what we can do, what has changed and should change for protecting privacy data. Morrison has stayed true to the genre of an information text. She has satiated her side which is to have more restrictions on accessing our private data. while also stating why some of our private data is helpful. The texts was well thought out and well written. This text was interesting as I knew about this issue and how there is lack of attention towards this issue. 

Week 6

When reading Dirk’s “Navigating Genres.”, I immediately noticed how informal the essay was. I really like the fact that although he was talking about finding the right genre for the type on paper you are writing and the fact he was teaching us something, it still felt like it was a normal conversation that I would be able to have a back and forth with. I can not really say that I am confused about anything this essay has to offer anymore. I had read this last semester for my last English class and had to annotate it as well. Then we went over everything so everything is still pretty fresh for me.

The article I chose was “Is Marriage Obsolete?”. I thought the article was okay at best. I was not a big fan of some of the ways she described certain things. For example, when she was describing her husband she said ” zero depth perception, and a palsy that makes his right hand shake whenever he passes me, say, a porcelain creamer filled to the brim with liquid nitrogen.”. I am sure that sentence is structured beautifully with solid imagery. BUT my problem stems with me having to decipher what she is trying to say there. I am not the most quick witted fella when it comes to deciphering texts and when I read an article on something that is of some what importance to me, I do not want to have to waste time thinking what the author is trying to tell me. Other than that I did really enjoy the honesty that came along when she was describing the benefits of marriage in todays age. She gave good reasons in support of and against marriage.

As soon as I saw this article on the list my interests were piqued. I clicked on it right away. I am a 26 year old male and I have been with my girlfriend going on 5 years now. Every family or social gathering now a days is pretty much just people bombarding us with questions such as “when are you too going to get married?” and statements like “You know when I was your age I was married for 6 years already”. Well I am sorry Debra but you’ve been divorced 3 times since so I am not quite sure I should be taking marriage advice from you. But anyway, my girlfriend and I have no plans for marriage any time soon. My reasons are the severe social anxiety I feel when I think about having to stand at the altar and people watching me. She wants to finish school and be established before we rush into things. As Heather said 40-50% of all marriages in the USA end in divorce and I am not rushing to be another statistic.

Genre

An article, where I went in expecting little from, has left an impression on me. I did not know how informative the article would be as I clicked on it, and as I began reading the first-person-written text. Why did I click on it? I was intrigued by another topic, initially. However, I decided I’d choose the article, ” ‘Why I’m Behind the Athletes’ Bill of Rights’ ” from Sports Illustrated. I don’t watch sports on a regular, I enjoy watching soccer matches, but definitely, I prioritize other thing before sports. However, I was drawn to this sports-related article because I was curious to see how much I could learn. I had never heard of the Athletes’ Bill of Rights. “What kind of article will this be?,” I asked myself. The subtle use of pathos really got me. Mix that in with the logical mentions to studies and their significance, the article sold. Cory Booker, the author of the article, is a Senator working to change something that’s been going on for way to long: college athletes’ exploitation. I was so extremely upset when I read about a college athlete that helped his team win, at the expense of his own health. He would go to bed hungry because he couldn’t afford a meal! Those in the power to take action and help their athletes have not taken action- in decades. Therefore, the author’s purpose is to garner attention and support to help the athletes, as a former athlete himself, now that he has the power to do so.

Senator Booker referenced NCAA’s own statistics. I understood from context that the NCAA was responsible of the college athletes, although the acronym was not explained, assuming the reader is familiar with the NCAA. I would say that the explanation of NCAA and it’s specific role is something notably absent in the article, however it does not take away from the statement the author is making, considering who his target audience is.  Apart from these details, Senator Booker’s article surpasses my expectations, for it was simple, straightforward, and appeals to both your logic and emotions.

This sports-genre article seemed to work pretty well. I think this because of something Dirk cited in his essay, “In sum, “too much choice is as debilitating of meaning as is too little choice. In language, too much variation results eventually in lack of meaning: mutual unintelligibility” (Devitt, “Genre” 53).” What this means to me is that the further you try to deviate from your genre, the less understandable your writing will be, and in effect, it will also be less appealing. Booker’s article is, on the contrary, focused on its thesis and maintains its focus all throughout the article.

 

 

Week 6: Genre

In the essay “Navigating Genres” by Kerry Dirk, he details the everyday genres that we encounter, at work and at home.  Dirk also draws attention to the fact that many things like the radio and television have genres that we are engaging unknowingly. The genres typically have a similar theme or location, that causes the story or song to be in a specific genre. The tones and word choices will also change based on the genre. For example and email to a friend would be much more casual, in both tone and grammar than an email to a professor.  I liked the way Dirk explained the concepts of genre in a more basic way.
The article that I chose to read was “Is Marriage Obsolete?” because I often wonder if marriage is worth it, and I was curious to hear the authors opinion. I personally don’t believe that marriage is necessary but partnerships and relationships of all kinds are important.
The author, Heather Havrilesky, uses an informal tone with the readers and incorporates information about her personal life into the story to help to prove her ideas. As a married woman, she details the pros and cons that she experiences in her marriage. While there can be bickering and tension between the couple, they seem to come around and find a way to reconnect with one another. According to Havrilesky, marriages are challenging and a test of the strength of the relationship that you have.  “Marriage can feel like a moral litmus test in this way: Your challenge is to maintain your composure as the staggering deficits of the highly ineffectual human by your side come into sharper and sharper focus.” The more important matters in a relationship become clear, even when there are moments of stress. 
More than 50% of marriages in the United States end in divorce and this is from the stress of marriages and the lack of necessity for men, in a woman’s life. In the article, she begins to explain that before the 1960’s divorces were not as common in america. At this time the social climate and many of the rules previously prevented women from being on their own, were changed. From reading the article I learned that married men tend to live longer than married women do and single women tend to live longer. I do not believe that Havrilesky believes that marriages are obsolete yet but she does see the appeal and reasons that many people want to be single.

Do we always pay attention to the title of the article?  I am always reading headline, sometimes I will get into authors mode and continue reading and amuse myself, but sometimes I just get tidies after reading few sentences as a result I move to other article. After reviewing all articles to read of them briefly I was hooked with the title “is marriage obsolete?” I started reading carefully, as I was getting more into story my interest grew and I was eager to find out what she had to share with the reader. I like her style of writing because she is not boring writer. I loved how she used an example of animal’s love life as a couple and how they care about each other, it was amazing to read. I believe she is using narrative genre of writing. In the beginning I thought she would start stating various reasons why should be marriage to be considered as an obsolete, but as a good writer she was ambiguous until the end. She is bringing out all the pros and cons of marriage. It is beautiful to read how she describes her marriage details and she is honest about obstacles in marriage and she uses her marriage as an example. The author is trying to make a point that new generation is perceives the marriage absolutely in other way than is was before. Woman is independent and powerful today.  woman is able to earn enough money to pay all her bills, travel, buy house and be able to survive without man. From the history, she brings the fact that woman was not allowed to owe anything. she uses research, while she is telling us the story. I was little confused with her daughter.  She was in one moment blaming herself. She believed that her daughter was against getting married or build a family because of them. The author is explaining that her daughter was witnessing how boring and tidies their marriage was after 12 years of living together. I don’t agree with the author. I believe living together even if you live with your own parents becomes tidies and one is looking for better place. We just have to help each other to make our everyday life more interesting and don’t blame each other. In conclusion she is stating that, When you are couple it is  important to acknowledge the issues and stand by each-others side.

Week 6

The article I chose to read was  “The Year We gave Up on Privacy” because just by reading the title It grabbed my attention and I was curious about what I will be reading about. From the title, I can tell it was going to be about people’s privacy being invaded by someone or something and I was too curious to know. After reading the article I also agree how a lot of information and data is being exposed online, due to pandemic people are now using technology to communicate with friends, family, employers and instead of commuting to work or work, zoom, google classroom and other apps are being used to stay connected. Even just grocery shopping, online shopping, and buying other necessities are all done online. Everything changed because of the pandemic, so has our privacy, people are now having to give up their privacy to keep up with their new lifestyle and it’s scary because we do not have control over where our data goes and how it is being used.

The author, Sara Morrison shared her own experience with how she used to avoid sites and services that could possibly collect her data but that changed when quarantine started. Morrison expressed how she gave away tons of her personal data online from delivery services, online shopping platforms, and virtual meetings. She decided to download a digital contact tracing tool to see where her data could be released, who wouldn’t want to know where their own information goes to, who could take this and how can they use it. People should learn more about this and be more aware of what’s behind the use of giving away data because today, technology is evolving quickly and fast, but there’s also a bad side to this too, such as exposing credit cards, personal phone numbers, etc. It’s crazy that just by a single tap or a click you can have your information put out into the web without knowing or understanding what could happen.

Lastly, “Navigating Genres” by Kerry Dirk talks about genre awareness can benefit us as writers because It “starts to see how specific choices that writers make result in specific actions on the part of readers”. I can connect this to why I picked to read “The Year We gave Up on Privacy” is because I gravitated to the title because I think that the title reflected the genre of the political blog or maybe lifestyle blog where she also included her own experience.

The Pandemic, Zoom, Facebook, Social Media want to control our lives.

It is without a doubt that we have lost our privacy. The article that caught my attention was “The Year we gave up on Privacy,” by Sara Morrison. This article speaks in loud and clear that the Global Pandemic put us in a vulnerable state where we had no choice, but to fall in the hands of  “Big Techs” because we had no choice. As stated in the article, “schools went remote, work was done from home, happy hour became virtual. In just a few short months, people shifted their entire lives on line.” We gave up so much without realizing that our privacy was being compromised at every level. We began shop, order food and go about our daily lives through technology.  There were more people on line than ever and our privacy was all over the place. Perfect example my debit card was compromised twice during the pandemic. Medical policies were being breached, doctors allowing to go against the HIPPA Laws, and facebook and other sites were taking advantage of peoples vulnerability.

I question when I am under stress if this is all a social experiment and we have fallen victims of this experiment. The article states that the contact tracers are releasing your information to airports trough health verification codes. Last weekend I was told that I was COVID positive. The next day in the morning I received a phone call questioning my recent contacts, what restaurants and stores I visited.  Confusion ran through my mind as I was being interrogated. My stress levels were at a 1000 because I had exposed my 83 year old grandma to COVID, answering all the questions without realizing that they would share it with the health department. in the articles it states that Immunity passports and companies are lining up to offer health verification programs to airports, offices, and concert venues. The thought of giving up my privacy so quick. When did this happen? I can only say that this has to be a social experiment and we Americans have fallen victim of  “BIG TECH” This organization wants to run our country, monitor us, and we have given in willingly and that to me is disturbing. I stand with Sean Hawley a long time voice against BIG TECH; it is time we protect our privacy and fight back against these monopolizers and put an end to Section 230 and protect the rights of all Americans.

The evidence that Big Tech giants are trying to control what we do and monitor us by censoring us is unacceptable and I want to protect my privacy by all means. There are states who are taking action like California who is doing everything in their power to protect their constituency and their privacy. The big question is when did we loose our privacy? How did we allow ourselves to be so vulnerable. I will continue to protect myself by not allowing social media, and technology to consume my time. Instead of ordering on line I have been going directly to the retailer, or restaurants. We have to take back our privacy and fight Big Tech with all we have.

Week 6 (Zenayda Bonilla)

I choose this topic because it captive mi attention of find out in what conditions is we are giving up to protect our privacy. “The Year We Give up on Privacy” by Sara Morrison. Honestly, this article makes me remember who people were aware of their personal information being on the web, including myself. Especially with my children, I like to know how much information they are sharing with the entire world on social media. Yet the pandemic abruptly flips our regular way to do things and moved everything online. Work, school, shopping, specials event are now transmitted online, for example, my friend just last week told me that she is getting married and she will be transmitted her wedding through. Before the pandemic hit us, the article refers to the polemic case about privacy in Facebook, and how the Trump administration was taking this information to track people. Nevertheless, being lacking in homes, the use of websites and the internet was vital in order to survive. The question is where our information is ending? Politicians are delivering a bill to protect people’s privacy. It is crazy how due to the fact of the coronavirus we have to give up and everything changes.

In contacts to that,  personally know some people,  how to refuse to use Zoom because they saw in the news the hackers were joining meetings and appearing naked on videos. Another friend that she missing a lot meeting with her friends and religious services because she does not want to make her information public. The funny thing is they are giving information in other ways that they don’t realize.

This is our reality, before the pandemic I was very meticulous about letting companies have my personal information because those companies sell individuals’ data to other companies. Yet, people share too much on their social media that it is easy to find their preferences, birthdays family member, and more in their accounts. But, do we have another option? Unfortunately, we don’t have too much power on it. During the first four months of the quarantine, for example,  I was cooking with my children different plates with my children and posting on my social media. Sometimes we make our lives public. Our children are spending so much time sharing Tictoks videos, sharing Facebook Live from their rooms, and making their self “Youtubers”. We are yield our personal information more than ever.

I think the idea of making a law to protect individual’s privacy is vital, because now than ever online environment is a wide-open door to harm the users. This article provides me information that I did not know before and refreshes my mind again. I like how the author develops the topic and adds extra information to support his argument, but a little too much in my opinion, at some point, I was kind of lost in this particular genre.

Genre (Yeshi Wangchuk)

The article “How coronavirus stress may scramble our brains” by Laura Sanders Talks about stress  how it affects our brain and how it makes us unable to focus. COVID-19 has been causing many stress for people all over the world worrying about the virus and protecting themselves. The death rate in the news kept on increasing making many people stressed even more but its not just the death because of covid many people has been unemployed and many business went bankrupt because of the pandemic. But as the article stated “That’s no surprise to scientists who study stress.Our brains are not built to do complex thinking, planning and remembering in times of massive upheaval”. This is how our brain is wired we cant plan ahead and focus when we are stressed. But scientist took advantage of the pandemic and used it to set up a massive real time experiment on stress.Our brain relies on nerve cell connections the prefrontal cortex is one part of the brain we use the prefrontal-cortex to  plan, focus, practice patients etc, but stress can slow down the signal causing us to lose focus or the ability to plan ahead when stressed. Under stress we are unable to call up our previous knowledge and memories. Covid-19 has stressed out a lot of people because of family deaths caused by the virus, loss of jobs, business going bankrupt, etc but the year 2020-2021 also had many other factors that lead to stress for example the BLM movement during this movement many civilians were hurt in a peaceful protest by the cops and this movement is very important spreading awareness about what is going on, the store riots many people broke into stores and stealing goods from business such as nike apple etc, the raid on the capital, bombing in the middle east, and racism and violence against the asian community during the year 2020-2021 many colored people and asians have been discriminated against and many have been injured for example the blm movement even though it was a peaceful protest the cops used tear gas and rubber bullets causing many injuries and for the asian many people from the age 13 and up have been facing many racism and violence a kid from middle school was followed by a group of students and had been beaten up, an asian college student in nyc had been punched in the face for no reason and had been told to leave the country being accused of bringing the virus into the country and now in 2021 many asian elders have been faced with machete facing serious injuries while on the other hand when the white people used violence and raided the capital nothing serious happened to the people but instead 5 cops were dead because of the movement. Because of the pandemic and the discrimination and violence against certain communities stress had been increased and many people became unfocused and nervous because of all this. I chose this because i think this is a very important issue that many people face and yes it did live up to my expectations it explained just how much stress can affect people throughout the world.