Week 14

It has now been a year since the beginning of the Covid-19 pandemic happened and everyone’s life changed. A lot of people lost jobs, loved ones, jobs and only god knows what else. The Covid-19 Pandemic has dramatically changed my life in positive and negative ways over the past year. Thankfully, through all the struggles I was still able to take care of all my responsibilities, graduate high school and complete my first year of college. Because of the pandemic, I was forced to stay home, attend school online and since everything closed down I wasn’t able to go out and just take my regular little breaks from stressful things.

Me being stuck at home all day caused me to worry. I am a very bad overthinker and tend to get into my own head a lot. I was constantly worried about what was happening in the world and where meals were coming from, how I was getting my sister to school, how was my brother getting lunch money, taking off work to get things done. Anything there was to worry about, I did. It caused me to  be really stressed out. I started slacking and losing a lot of motivation which made it harder for me to handle my responsibilities. I couldn’t really reach out to any one or do any of the things that were stress relievers for me. I was just stuck home, stuck in the same routine, stuck in my head. This eventually got in the way of school, highschool AND college.

Going to school from home made me feel isolated from my friends. On top of issues the pandemic caused, I have other health issues so I had to be on lockdown way more than the people around me. And all though I missed my friends and going out, I was glad I didn’t have to worry about all the little petty highschool issues. Who liked who, who wanted to hang out with who, all the stupid issues. I hated my highschool but love my friends if that makes sense. Besides my 3 main friends, I’m not a very social person. I try to come in contact with the least amount of people I can. But even for someone who doesn’t really talk much, I was way too alone. It’s one thing to just not see people but when you can’t really call or contact them as much because their parents sent them out of state it becomes too much. I felt very alone. To avoid this, I tried different hobbies. I got back into reading, writing little wattpad stories, playing my cello & violin etc. Which worked for a while but eventually I started feeling the same way.  Everything slowly began  to appear as a nightmare I was not able to wake up from. My job ended up going on furlough and shutting down and I was back to stressing a new set of issues. What used to be, how can I get my sister from school if I work turned into could we even afford to send her. And she’s too young to stay home alone. I had to worry about how long my final check can last us until I find another job. ( Thank god for PUA). However, once this happened more family started coming around and it was good to have my family beside me. My family helped as much as they can but with the rising prices, declining markets, and cost of living rising it’s almost impossible to be on top of everything. Slowly, I got very depressed but was still pushing through.

Week 12

I feel like Carr meant that because it’s so easy to just search up a topic and get so much information on it our brains don’t really need to think much. When looking in a book, you have to find the book, the chapter, then your topic, then break down what you wrote, make sure you fully understand and then use your research. With all this modern technology all you have to do is type in your topic, and worry about how you’re gonna word it. Carr definitely has a point. We’ve become so dependent on knowing that the internet will have what we need we don’t ever do any real digging for info. Millions of articles and sites pop up with all the information. When I was younger, I did walk to the library and I used to walk all around the library, find my books and either research there or at home. From me doing both I definitely noticed a difference. I definitely become a little lazier with researching. In earlier years I would research weeks before an assignment because I knew how long it would take. Now, I could put aside 1-3 hours to research and put together the evidence that I need. The internet gives both. It gives us all the knowledge we want right away, but it kind of takes away the learning sense of it. With researching now, I don’t really hold on to the information for as long as I did when I spent days reading and re-reading it. Now research is more for the assignment or whatever you’re researching for rather than actually taking anything away from it.

Week 13

  1. In early schooling I was always told not to use Wikipedia because it isn’t reliable since any one can edit the articles there. A Lot of times, essays wouldn’t even count if we used Wikipedia. After reading the article, I feel like Wikipedia could still be used as a source, as long as you double check what’s on there.  Wikipedia has definitely came a long way from when we were in elementary/middle school.  There’s more articles to site from and more people want to actually teach people stuff.
  2. Some ways Purdy explains that Wikipedia can be useful because people can go in and update information which keeps topics up to date. That way, you’re not always getting told the same old information from years ago. Wikipedia articles are constantly being revised and fact checked so now Wikipedia articles are more reliable in a way. Purdy also points out how Wikipedia isn’t just a place for research but for spreading knowledge too. Wikipedia has multiple usages and thats why it’s recognized for being more useful.
  3. I wouldn’t really consider Wikipedia a community platform because although anyone can edit and show where they cited evidence you can’t really interact with the authors. For example, our forum for this class would be considered a community platform because we are able to interact with each other, comment, and actually have discussions. Wikipedia could only be considered a community because any one can write and edit things. I didn’t really understand of all the conversations in the article honestly.

Bad Ideas About Writing, Week 15: Full Circle

The “bad idea” I chose was “The Traditional Research Paper is Best” by Alexandria Lockett. From my first read, I didn’t completely understand the argument proposed by the author. However, going back, it became more clear to me why the author decided to begin the argument by contrasting the “modern” way of writing research papers to the “traditional”. The new and improved research paper does not oblige the student to go through the hassle of commuting to the library, searching for adequate sources, finding and investigating and repeating these steps all over again. Instead, at our fingertips are millions of sources for about any topic you search for on the internet. Yet, that is exactly the problem. The author refers to this abundance of information as a “data deluge.” Is the negative connotation in this term implying something bigger? I believe so. Lockett transitions into a body paragraph saying the word “unfortunately” followed by an explanation of the modern research paper downfalls. One example of such: “Instructors may underestimate the nuances of popular databases and overestimate students’ frequent use of databases as competency. However, Internet research really is a lot of work.” Therefore, one big dilemma is that, rather than approaching the traditional methods of research paper writing, instructors demand a greater number of sources to students that must navigate the “data deluge” of the internet to write their paper. Additionally, students will likely be much more disposed toward plagiarism, since “most people cannot handle the chore of deciphering the data deluge.” As if that weren’t enough, media owning companies’ “data collection practices and [the[ design of these companies’ websites direct users’ attention, which affects their research skills.”

Lockett, however, does not conclude here. The essay continues by entering the “research 2.0” topic. Internet research for a research paper can be used in a more effective way. The instructors must make part of the change, which has a lot to do with attitude. For example, changing the narrow views of Wikipedia and Wikipedia’s use when searching for sources and perspective. Even online writing groups are possible, which are very encouraging to writers. Lockett now concludes: “[…] few educational institutions and disciplines are cultivating the technical, scientific, and artistic competencies necessary for editing, navigating, and managing the Internet’s infinite retrieval mechanisms. When students are taught how to recognize that they have the power to diversify Internet content with high-quality research, the research paper 2.0 could play a major role in balancing the dynamics of knowledge production between traditional
institutions and emerging media.” In other words, the way we approach the “modern” research paper will greatly influence the result and quality of the final paper.

I chose this piece because I’ve had to do research papers in the past, and I was curious to see the author’s point of view on this topic. I agreed 100% with the term “data deluge.” Sometimes, it feels like your drowning in information, but it’s as if your own paper will be one more in the millions of results, so how great can your writing really be. However, the approach suggested by the author, and the change of attitude by students and instructors as well, may very much improve future research papers.

Week 14: Collaborative Skills (Vicky Chen)

These hardships have without a doubt taught me and plays a part in the person I am today. I have learned to never think that something can’t happen to you. Anything is capable of happening to everyone. You can’t predict what happens and you can’t change what has happened. I have always been pretty independent on my own. I constantly remind myself from time to time that I can do anything if I put my mind and heart into it. Being this independent has really taught me to have faith in myself. I’m pretty content with myself but I would be lying if I said I didn’t want anyone else around me. I love my own company the same way I love other people’s company. Despite all that has happened, there was never a moment that I did not have faith that everything was going to be okay. This past year has also taught me to cherish every moment and day like it is my last. Something so little could change your life in an instant. Instead of fighting to bring moments back or trying to force things to happen the way you want them to, I’ve learned to just accept and live in the now. The past is nothing but photographs and memories. The future is not even here yet. In a way, the only thing that exists is now. You can only control your own perspective. I was once told, “Sometimes in life, temporary struggles are necessary in order to push yourself to continually strive.” In other words, nothing is permanent and what doesn’t kill you makes you stronger. A bad day is after all just a day.

Community-Base Discourse

I loved John Lewis’s disposition about community. I can relate to myself. I was fascinated to read his article, which made me believe that everything is possible with love and peace. We can hope to have more individuals like John lewis in our society. I love how he is encouraging young people to fight against hate and aggression. Lewis inspires them to use love and peace. Lewis uses his life experience from his childhood until now how many obstacles he had to go through, but he never gave up, fighting against violence. I am inspired, by Lewis’s attitude about life and the power of community. After reading both articles, I could picture clearly how devoted both authors were to their community. I agree with Whitehead’s point of view about how the community changes overnight. Unfortunately, neighborhoods are expanding. As a result, everything around becomes so unfamiliar that one can feel bewildered time to time. He makes a good point when he says that it did not happen overnight, it was disappearing gradually, one only notice when it was gone. The author is proposing to support our neighborhood and try not to neglect it. At the end of the article, he delivers  hope for the future. He states clearly not to judge any behavior until it happens.

Full Circle

From the segment “Bad Ideas on what good writing is” I chose to write on the topic – “You can learn to write in general- by Elizabeth Wardle” where writing is simple is a bad conception. Elizabeth Wardle says how one cannot write something without a specific topic. Every writing experience is different when she writes – “context, audience, purpose, medium, history, and values of the community all impact what writing is and needs to be in each situation”. I agree with her as I feel every writing is intricate and not simplistic. One must study and explore the perspective of different situations or multiple writers to get a better hold in writing. Elizabeth Wardle in her writing implies that everything around us is changing, so is writing. A better writer requires more than a story. A writer should always take into consideration every possible aspect and have a thought process while writing. I chose this topic as I always thought that a good writer can write about anything, they do not need any topic, but after reading the article it gave me a better understanding on how one can improve in writing and reading. This reading made me realize the contradiction of Shakespeare quote – “the pen is mightier than the sword” –I realize the pen itself is not enough to make one an effective writer, practice and prior knowledge in writing might help one to be more successful. A writing speaks a lot about a writer’s perspective than the writer thinks it does. A writing takes a lot of study, research and sophistication as every word matters, it is more than just a thing to do.

Good writers always follow my rules

After reading the chapter, ” Good Writer Always Follows My Rules,” I was impressed and attracted to the ideas. The following rules usually frustrate the writer. The Regulations do not make the writer a qualified writer. I agree with the author to give freedom to the writer to be more ambiguous and make the reader more interested. I chose this chapter because I can relate to the author myself someways. I am not into writing as a profession, but I think regulations can disorient the writer. Every writer has a technique of writing. Therefore, we have to accept it. The author also states that it is better to use rules with grammar to help the audience understand the correct language. I like how the author includes how to manage the time when one is writing. We should not stop writing. They are encouraging you to find your ways to write. Usually, the results are excellent. I was impressed by how they emphasize writers’ do to judge other individuals writing styles because of their structure. I believe if the writing style is unique, it can make chapters more interesting.

Week 15 Full Circle

  1. I chose to read Texting Ruins Students Grammar by Scott Warnock from Bad Ideas About Writing And Digital Technology. Arthur starts by saying that an old criticism that has been going around since 1975 that bad handwriting has been an issue for many years now a recent criticism came up saying technology is ruining students grammar or worsening. He also addresses the main problem with this bad idea, first is that “Complaints about writing deteriorating because of digital technology are simply part of a history of complaining about the worsening grammar, writing, mechanics, or style of younger generations” (pg 301). Secondly, the definition of grammar in the context is often misunderstood and lastly, the bad idea has no proof to be accurate.
  2. The author has done his research and found that in the journal Reading and Writing, researchers studied the relationship between texting and grammar and they found no inconsistency in writings from all different age groups. Another study was made by writing researcher Michaela Cullington, she also says that texting is not affecting students’ use of standard written English, therefore, there is no connection. There has been much other research that has been done on this case and found to have the same results, this proves that texting has no connection to writing.
  3. I choose this piece because when I read the title I already had a disagreement that texting is not worsening writing but I still wanted to read to find what the author has to say about this. While reading this chapter I had many agreements with what the author said especially when Warnock said, “perhaps we might instead see the use of digital writing as yet another example of how humans find ingenious ways to make the language” (pg306). I significantly agree because I think that texting is a language, we have a certain language we use to communicate with our partners, friends, and relatives. Texts and writing are two different things with different purposes and functions, texting is meant to be quick, casual, and easy to read without any rules to follow. Writing is meant to be the opposite, it has rules, you need to be conscious, and you need time to think about what you will write.

Week 15: Full Circle (shafi khan)

The bad idea herein is the assertion that digital communication, especially texting on social media, damages students’ grammar skills. The author claims it is a bad idea because it simply mirrors the history of lamenting about the diminishing language skills of the younger generations. Moreover, the author argues that the assertion is founded on unproven association between digital writing and other forms of writing. In other words, no empirical study has been conducted to establish a causal relationship between digital writing and other forms of writing. Additionally, the author opines that the definition of grammar in the context of digital writing is always untrue.

I chose the piece because of the need to put to rest the debate about the impact of digital writing on students’ writing skills. Social media communication has become the norm, particularly among the younger generations. There are no rules on social media communications. As a result, many young people mutilate grammar in their attempts to simplify communication. Although the author terms the assertion that texting ruins students’ skills a bad idea, it is important to note that over time, the unregulated and grammatically incorrect social media communication can compromise the students’ language proficiencies.

To counter this bad idea, a good idea would be to conduct a robust empirical study to establish the link between digital communication and other forms of writing. Essentially, the debate will be put to rest once there is unimpeachable evidence on the adverse effect of texting on students’ grammar skills.  Proving that social media communication ruins students’ language proficiencies would inform the implementation of measures to regulate social media participation among students. In summary, texting ruins students’ grammar skills.